I did it! Awesome ending!

Posted at Jun 12, 2007 11:18 am

I found the best ending for hartfield!!!! Thank you King James Bible!!! The whole “whither shall I cause my shame” thing has been eliminated- it no longer makes sense because I changed the crime. Now the ending is way creepier and also understandable. (I had three people tell me they had no idea what was going on in the last scene.) The church scene is different, there is a new character and a new scene involving Dora talking about her childhood to a senile minister– She also does some climbing- and there is a confrontation between her and the Earl’s son).
Final revisons done- need to put in MS format and send off today . HURRAHHH

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